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POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

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  • 05-26-2008 10:50 PM

    • auntbobby
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    POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

    Dear Poets of Artella:

    June is, among other things, "Rose Month".  Here's my challenge to you for the month of June:

    Write a poem a week, inspired by the NAME of a rose. Here's a very short list of Rose Names to get you started:

    Abraham Lincoln
    Charade
    Joseph's Coat
    Don Juan
    Peace 
     
    I found this link, which lists hundreds more: http://www.johnsrosegarden.org/JRGtour/JRGlist.htm.
     
    SO, are you game?
     
    Looking for lots of poems ~~  Hugs ~~  Aunt Bobby

     

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  • 05-27-2008 10:33 AM In reply to

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    Re: POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

     Dear Aunt Bobby – What a wonderful idea!  I accept your challenge!  Roses are so special to me and so are YOU!  To start the challenge for June, while also bringing May to a close, I will post this favorite rose poem from my past.  I still dream of its future potential in a project of the same name: “The Impossible Garden”.  It seems the perfect time and place to share this particular poem.  I wrote it to accompany a self portrait/mask assemblage.  A section of the poem qualifies as an Altered Poem, because it was inspired by SARK’s (Susan Ariel Rainbow Kennedy’s) advice on “How to Be An Artist”.  

     

    Red Rose Wild

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    RED ROSE WILD

    A Life Mask & Mixed Media Assemblage with Poem

    IMPOSSIBLE GARDEN

    By Lori Minick, 2004

    Then the rainstorm came over her
    Bringing with it many unwanted tears.
    She had been cut,
    Separated from her wild roots,
    Planted here in this unrecognizable place.

    “Why, oh why
    Did he have to pick me?”
    Wailed Red Rose Wild,
    Who used to be free.

    “Never stop growing,”
    Responded the Sun
    “Do it for love dear Rose
    And then you will see.”

    Rose looked up
    Through the falling rain
    Her tear streaked face turned up
    Toward the sky seeking a familiar face.
    “But this is an impossible garden.
    And I am afraid.
    I am afraid I will forget how.”
    Whimpered Red Rose Wild.

    “Then try to remember, dear Rose.
    Life is an Act of Love.
    You must cultivate it.
    Use tools from above.
    Allow time for this to take root.”

    “What are these tools?
    How do I use them?
    And where can they be found?”
    Wondered Red Rose Wild.

    “The answer, my lovely one
    I have written upon your face.”
    Replied the radiant Sun.

    “Each day with unfailing Grace:
    Play with old people
    Believe in children
    Build a fort of innocence
    Celebrate its walls
    Transform responsibility
    Stimulate perfect calm
    Mend broken fences.
    Draw on moonbeams
    Dive into moods
    Drive away fears
    Bless wandering snails
    Listen to the trees
    And hug your dreams.
    Display that which you seek to possess,
    Outrageously, obsessively
    With unseemly exaggeration
    But with genuine preoccupation.
    Open up and get wet!
    Entertain the rain
    And behold my rainbow!
    Stir the fragrance of your soul
    Which is the aroma of my love for you,
    Then you shall find yourself abloom
    In the heart of
    This impossible garden.”

    “Surely not by my own red self?
    Promise you won’t leave me…
    Alone to wilt in my uncertainty!”
    Worried Red Rose Wild.

    With a triumphant burst through the clouds
    Wielding his colorful promise at last,
    The smiling Sun caressed her velvet face lovingly
    And softly whispered,
    “Do you not see, my glorious one?
    You have always and yet,
    Have never been
    Free.
    This garden is impossible…
    Yes, impossible
    Without me.”

    “My, oh my,
    Now I am truly free,”
    Whispered Red Rose Wild,
    Who used to be me.

    Lori

    "Listen to your life. See it for the fathomless mystery that it is. In the boredom and pain of it no less than in the excitement and gladness: touch, taste, smell your way to the holy and the heart of it because in the last analysis all moments are key moments, and life itself is grace." ~Frederick Buechner
  • 05-27-2008 1:58 PM In reply to

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    Re: POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

    Great start, Harqn2!   Thanks for being first on board.  I'm expecting LOTS of poems here -- the possibilities seem endless!

    Hugs ~~ Aunt Bobby

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  • 05-28-2008 4:24 PM In reply to

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    Re: POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

    More -- More  -- More!!

    How about MORE poems inspired by the names of roses! 

    Can't think of any?  Here are some from the S list at the URL in the first post:

    Silver Moon, Silver Star, Singing in the Rain, Sunflare, Sundowner, Sweet Vivien, Sunny June

    That should give you poets some inspiration!

    Hugs

    Aunt Bobby

     

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  • 05-28-2008 6:31 PM In reply to

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    Re: POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

    I'm so glad you wrote another post here, Aunt Bobby.  I missed the first one.  Roses are my absolute favorite flower.  I had an article published about my grandfather's roses several years ago.  I included it in my blog here in Artellaland.  Anyway, I definitely want to try writing a poem. 

    Bill 

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  • 05-28-2008 6:33 PM In reply to

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    Re: POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

    Your assemblage is stunning, harqn2!  I hope it's alright that I print your poem so I can really take it all in.

    Bill Charlebois

    You're only given a little spark of madness. You mustn't lose it. - Robin Williams
  • 05-28-2008 10:51 PM In reply to

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    Re: POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

    Thanks, Bill -- And yes, please feel free to print it.  It's a lot to take in.  When Red Rose was on exhibit at the annual "Simply Red" exhibit ("The redder, the better" is the motto at this event which is held on or near Valentine's Day at the dA Gallery in Pomona, CA.) they had to put up a sign "Do Not Touch" because people wanted to reach out and make contact.  I do remember that Red Rose did make it into the critics review when they made the rounds that year.  When they described the top ten red list favorites the adjectives chosen ranged from erotic and some other words, which slip my mind.  The one I remember of course is what they called Red Rose:  Eerie.  I took that as a compliment.Stick out tongue   

    Lori

    "Listen to your life. See it for the fathomless mystery that it is. In the boredom and pain of it no less than in the excitement and gladness: touch, taste, smell your way to the holy and the heart of it because in the last analysis all moments are key moments, and life itself is grace." ~Frederick Buechner
  • 05-29-2008 5:47 AM In reply to

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    Re: POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

    This is a poem I wrote a year ago, and pulled out because it fits the theme so well. I purchased roses one Saturday, intending to plant one for each of my nearly grown children, and never noted any of the names until I got home. Then I was struck by the relevance of each name.

    THREE ROSES 

    It is a farmers market Saturday

    rhubarb pocket pies
    vine ripened tomatoes
    baby red potatoes
    handfuls of green onions
    fresh muenster cheese
    corn fresh from the field
    white cap mushrooms

    and

    three tea roses bought from the whiskery
    gentleman farmer in the green cap

    The first rose,
    creamy petals melting into
    the colors of dawn
    bush shiny with new growth
    buds at every terminus
    dedicated to my first born
    my first daughter.
    Day Breaker - the rose's name -
    my first child, my day breaker.
    Awake with every sunrise,
    born to unsuspecting parents,
    we thought our days would
    continue as before
    unaware, we were, that a baby's
    purpose in life
    is to break the day
    into tiny prisms of time
    so that nothing but baby love
    ever is done.
    Sweet Day Breaker.

    The second rose,
    a precious deep pink beauty
    carries the moniker Gentle Giant,
    planted for my middle child,
    my only son,
    my tyrannical teen who mellowed into
    my beloved gentle giant.
    (those kindergarten kids you teach
    are sure to be in love
    their gentle giant teacher)
    Handsome Gentle Giant.

    And the third tea rose
    planted for my third child 
    a lovely rose in shades of cream
    dancing with pink fringes.
    Secret is the rose's name,
    how fitting for this last of mine,
    she who always keeps her secrets,
    and always surprised
    when we ask her who she is
    and what she thinks.
    Precious Secret.

    Three roses.
    Three children.

    Fully blessed.

     

    Bo 

    “Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow.”
    Mary Anne Radmacher


  • 05-29-2008 8:03 AM In reply to

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    Re: POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

    Wonderful, Bo!   Thanks.

    It certainly DOES fit the theme!

    Hugs ~~  Aunt Bobby

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  • 05-29-2008 11:51 AM In reply to

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    Re: POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

    Ok, Poets -- here's one from me.

    (Remember, the poem doesn't HAVE to be about roses -- it just has to be inspired by the NAME of a rose.)

    Windchimes

    The little ones tinkle
    The big ones go boom
    The in-between-ones softly chime
    The wind makes the music
    It lightens my soul
    It's heavenly music - sublime!

     OK -- it's YOUR turn!

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  • 05-29-2008 3:48 PM In reply to

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    Re: POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

     Beautiful, moving, touching, eloquent!!!  (And, said the snail at the top of the knoll, It's all downhill from here...)

     

    The Ballad of Betty Prior
     
    by Constance Bates
     

    No one could say from whence I'd come,
    I just popped up for free;
    Alongside stately old roses,
    There suddenly was me.
     
    Although I was an average thing,
    My person thought me pretty:
    She commented, "Oh look, a pink --
    I think I'll call her... Betty."
     
    The other roses laughed a bit,
    Although they tried to hide it;
    I knew my parentage was poor;
    But thought to just abide it.
     
    I sat beside Bing Crosby then,
    Will Scarlet, and Bronze Star,
    Wishing I were Robin Hood --
    But you are who you are.
     
    I thought of borrowing Joseph's Coat,
    But then Just Joey said,
    "See Sexy Rexy over there?
    They once lopped off her head."
     
    The Fairy hit the carpet then,
    So pale was Rosy Cheeks,
    And Cecile Brunner said he'd never
    Heard of such techniques!
     
    "It seems she kind of just gave up,
    Refused to blossom, too.
    You'd best be careful, Betty, or
    That could happen to you."
     
    Neon Lights suggested that
    I outperfume dear Chloris,
    Whose smell, if I may say so,
    Could use buckets of Lavoris.
     
    "Do talk to Razzle Dazzle!"
    Recommended stout Ralph's Creeper.
    They all said, "Take a page from Peace --
    Now that one is a keeper."
     
    I put the Neon Lights on then,
    I posed like Madame Hardy,
    And though a Lady of the Dawn,
    I strive to remain hearty.
     
    I pretend I'm Constance Spry,
    Believe I am First Prize,
    And stake my claim like Bonica,
    And sway like Flutterbyes.
     
    See, though I don't know who I am,
    I hold my bloom much higher:
    I say "My name isTiffany",
    Though only Betty, prior.
     
     
     

    1. "For many years, Betty Prior was one of the most popular roses in the United States, and it is still very popular. It is a graceful small upright bush with single pink flowers that are displayed in clusters that often rise above the foliage. The ovoid buds of this rose open to medium-size, single carmine-pink cupped blooms with darker pink on the reverse sides of the petals. The fragrant flowers occur in clusters, and repeat throughout the growing season." -- http://www.ph-rose-gardens.com/01307.htm

    2. "Not complicated or fragile. Hardy and enduring. Well, in a word, sensible. Thomas C. Cooper writes: 'The rose Betty Prior is rumored to be the favorite of the Queen of England, and if this is true, I imagine the appeal for her is similar to that of another English institution for which she has a well-documented affection - the sensible shoe.'"  -- http://www.marinrose.org/monthjuly04.html

    Constance

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  • 05-30-2008 7:22 AM In reply to

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    Re: POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

     I have always loved Betty Prior.  What a fantastic poem, Constance!  It's making me want to do an altered book about roses.  I haven't found my poetry hat this week, but I'll keep looking.

    Bill Charlebois

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  • 05-30-2008 9:40 AM In reply to

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     Oh... my... GOODNESS!  I can't imagine a more wonderful thing than An Altered Book By Bill on ROSES!!!

    Constance

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  • 05-30-2008 10:05 AM In reply to

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    if the night were perfum

    if the night enwrapped me

    in her breath of an old Spanish rose!!!!!

     

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    Re: POETRY CHALLENGE FOR JUNE

    Goya, dear!  It is GREAT to have you back! 

    This is a fine poem about roses.  I'd love it if you would write several!

    Hugs ~~  Aunt Bobby

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