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Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

Last post 03-13-2008 10:59 AM by Goya Toledo. 26 replies.
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  • 03-01-2008 3:32 PM

    Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

     In the winter garden

    in a colored copper shadow

    of naked tree's branches,

    a red cat stands

    on a full moon night. 

    M
  • 03-03-2008 10:13 PM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

     

    Goya,

    Gata de cobre aqui - this must be me in your poem, lol!

     

    Rojo

    Anaranjado

    Amarillo

    Verde

    Azul

    Indigo

    Violeta

    Breathtaking colors in a rainbow of options

    When the grey of the watery windows of my soul give way

    To dazzling refractory sunlight

     

     

     

     

    Be you - and no one else.
  • 03-04-2008 7:14 AM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

     Both of you are so inspiring!  I'm at work now, but since every artist loves color, I'm going to have to write a poem, too.  Smile

    Bill Charlebois

    You're only given a little spark of madness. You mustn't lose it. - Robin Williams
  • 03-04-2008 8:09 AM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    Crisp red apples
    Juicy oranges
    Plump yellow grapefruit
    Fuzzy green kiwi
    Sweet ripe blueberries
    Lucious purple grapes
    . . . I must be hungry -- the rainbow makes me think of fruit

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  • 03-04-2008 8:44 AM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    Tempt me with a kiss

    from your luscious red lips.

    Excite me with the fire

    in your smoky brown eyes.

    Tease me with the moistness

    of your pink probing tongue.

    Caress me with the touch

    of your creamy white skin.

    Darn!  Daydreaming again.

    Punch the black keys

    on the boring gray keypad . . .
    Bill Charlebois

    You're only given a little spark of madness. You mustn't lose it. - Robin Williams
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  • 03-04-2008 12:17 PM In reply to

    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    Hola GATA DE COBRE , exactly, that was you: and this is another:

    Drench my body with black syrup

    sprinkle yellow and golden magic over me

    until my body glows

    douse me with red earth--two or three

    spoons full, maybe more, till I can take no more.

    Invigorate my spirit with colors, please

    that I need to teach the children

    and plant colorful seeds in my garden.

    From GOYA

     

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  • 03-04-2008 9:26 PM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    I LOVE it, Bill!!

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  • 03-06-2008 1:18 PM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    After reading all these marvelous words about color, I thought I might jump in with something a little bit different - how the lack of color can create equally strong emotional feelings.

    gRaYsCaLe   by chameleon

    snow white

    blowing whitesmoke

    concealing gainsboro thoughts

     

    lightgray area

    finding a silver lining

    darkgray clouds overhead

     

    gray wolf running

    past dimgray lights

    in the black of night

     

    darkslategray walls

    with slategray windows

    of the lightslategray house.

     

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  • 03-06-2008 2:09 PM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    Clever, Chameleon, and very well done!  Great addition to the COLORS poems!

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  • 03-06-2008 2:24 PM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    All these fantastic poems about color make me think we need a color-poem zine!

    Bill Charlebois

    You're only given a little spark of madness. You mustn't lose it. - Robin Williams
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  • 03-06-2008 2:55 PM In reply to

    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

     

    Bill: I would love to participe, but I do not know a thing or two about zines...colors, absence of color, mute colors....wow!!!!

    STONECOLOR:

    Who will try the words in the rocks?

    mineral of mica and/or bone-white chalk?

    Bill: I will write scrapbooks in stones, if you want,

    in whish you will note

    the feel of graysand  and green dank moss.

    My books right open in the rain,

    my rocks...

    From GOYA

    M
  • 03-06-2008 3:01 PM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    Very creative, Chameleon! I like the imagery and the feeling of your "non-colors." Bravo!!

    Isabella

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    -- Pablo Picasso
  • 03-06-2008 4:12 PM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    Lovely poem, Goya -- you DO have such a way with words!  Hugs ~~ Aunt Bobby

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  • 03-06-2008 5:04 PM In reply to

    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    Hola Tia Bobby - well...NOT only me, but everybody  else here...

    Look at Chamaleon's poem.....wow...thanks, GOYA

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  • 03-06-2008 5:32 PM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    Contagiously colorful, everyone!  I'm seeing red . . .

    a red cat stands (Goya)
    Rojo (copper cat) 
    crisp red applies (Aunt Bobby)
    from your luscious red lips (Bill)
    douse me with red earth--two or three (Goya)

    We still have blue, green, orange, yellow, purple . . . .

    - chameleon

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