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New challenge, let's write poems about LETTERS...

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  • 01-31-2008 9:37 PM

    New challenge, let's write poems about LETTERS...

    THE LETTER THAT WAS NEVER SENT:

     For many years

    he wrote the same letter.

    He will buy white paper

    every few days

    and begin again and again

    Til sunrise would write

    and then burned  what he'd done

    madman.

     

    From GOYA

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    I remember the first letter he ever wrote me
    The first time we had been apart since I knew he loved me
    Cold and sterile -- I didn't understand -- I expected passion
    He told my mother he did not know how to write me

    "Write what you would say if she were here," she told him
    The second letter was better
    So full of passion I cut my trip short
    And went home to him.

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  • 02-01-2008 6:36 AM In reply to

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    Re: New challenge, let's write poems about LETTERS...

    Cartas de invierno -  Is that letters from hell?  That poor madman!   Tongue Tied 

    Bill Charlebois

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    That is so romantic, Aunt Bobby!  Wilted Flower

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    Re: New challenge, let's write poems about LETTERS...

    Bill -- "Cartas de invierno" means "Winter letters".  "Letters from Hell" would be "Cartas de infierno" -- Verdad, Goya?

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    That's so funny!  It shows how easy it is to get mixed up when speaking a foreign language.  A friend of mine lived in Argentina for a while.  He and has wife got on a bus, and he said, "Dos para dios."  The bus driver had to explain he thinks my friend meant to say, "Dos para diez."

    auntbobby:

    Bill -- "Cartas de invierno" means "Winter letters".  "Letters from Hell" would be "Cartas de infierno" -- Verdad, Goya?

    Bill Charlebois

    You're only given a little spark of madness. You mustn't lose it. - Robin Williams
  • 02-01-2008 10:49 AM In reply to

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    Perfecto, winter letters.

    Bill, letters from hell, it will be cartas desde el infierno ....Devil

    GOYA

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  • 02-05-2008 8:55 PM In reply to

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    Re: New challenge, let's write poems about LETTERS...

     Hello Goya and Everyone -

    Bill's fun translation got me started and before I know it I was reading letters from hell.  Great idea, Goya!  And great slip, Bill!  Here's the poem:

     

     

    Letters from Hell

     

    You read them with smoking fingers

    and a glass of water at your elbow

    to prevent blisters and stink.

    Everyone in the house dreams

    of meadows and ice-cream

    while you sit as though chained to your desk,

    reading by hell-light far

    into the questionable part of the night.

     

    In the morning you stuff them in the freezer

    wrapped in an old towel,

    hoping no one wants a frozen waffle

    or a tube of orange juice.

    Hunger doesn’t interest you now,

    nor the dishes in the sink.

    Children blowing through the doors

    escape your notice at last.

     

    Tonight you will clean up the puddle

    of defrosted t.v. dinners and take the letters,

    still blazing, from the freezer.

    You’ll muffle their brilliance with the ruined towel

    and creep past the sleepers

    to your study, ducking low

    beneath the smoke-alarm.

    Dawn will find you still reading,

    infernal script branded on each fingertip,

    your eyes red as dragon eggs

    and your blood simmering,

    never more alive.

     

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  • 02-05-2008 9:03 PM In reply to

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     Kate, that is too cool.  I mean, hot!  Devil

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    Re: New challenge, let's write poems about LETTERS...

     Thanks, Bill!  And I LOVE your merry little demon.  Maybe a writer of letters from hell?

    Kate 

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    Burning memories,

    words etched forever on white.

    To hell with "Dear John!"  Crying

     

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    Re: New challenge, let's write poems about LETTERS...

    Powerful stuff, these "Letters from Hell" -- see what you started, Goya?  What a great topic!

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  • 02-07-2008 8:42 AM In reply to

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    This just goes to show how one "letter" (v, f, or otherwise) can leave you feeling cold or hot, or just warm all over.

  • 02-07-2008 9:14 AM In reply to

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    Perhaps it lives under the furniture,

    because it arrives early when the night invades us.

    First, I leave it a letter with the rules of the house at the entrance.

    Second, I leave it a glass of water by my bed

    So that will not suffer thirst as it moves through the rooms.

    I leave a bike by the door so that it takes a spin.

    I do these things for it so that it will not complicate my dream.

    It's my pact with the gosht of silence.

    FROM GOYASleep

     

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  • 02-07-2008 9:15 AM In reply to

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    Re: New challenge, let's write poems about LETTERS...

    Alice Jordan:

    This just goes to show how one "letter" (v, f, or otherwise) can leave you feeling cold or hot, or just warm all over.

     

     

    Love that, Alice!

    And true, too, isn't it?  I'm very pro-v, myself.  As a child one of my favorite words was lavender, gleaned from the song, "Lavender's blue, Dilly dilly..."  (The other was serendipity which sounds just as magical as it really is.) 

     Alice's observation makes me think that it might be fun to do a SENSUAL ALPHABET poem - how letters affect the body and the senses.
     

    KateSinging (sighing, swinging, slinking, starring, stimulating, sussurant...)

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