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Poetry Challenge: Write a Fall/Autumn Haiku

Last post 11-19-2007 8:57 PM by Heather. 11 replies.
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  • 11-13-2007 6:45 PM

    • Constance Bates
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    Poetry Challenge: Write a Fall/Autumn Haiku

    Rules:

    1. Let's use the three-line standard, with 5 syllables, 7 syllables, and 5 syllables.

    2. Don't write the word "fall" or "autumn" as a season (leaves could fall, though).

    3. Let's add this: If you want, make your poem three complete haikus -- each with a complete thought that all together address the fall season.

     

    Crisp and dry, leaves cling

    To weary, wrinkled branches

    Then wave their good-byes. 

     

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  • 11-13-2007 9:15 PM In reply to

    • MarneyM
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    Re: Poetry Challenge: Write a Fall/Autumn Haiku

    silk organza draped

    on prophetic crystal balls 

    waltzing with the wind

     

    leaves become lovely

    on their magic carpet ride

    right before they land

     

    such secrets they know

    kept in veiny diaries

    vibrant unto death
     

     

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  • 11-13-2007 9:40 PM In reply to

    • auntbobby
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    Re: Poetry Challenge: Write a Fall/Autumn Haiku

    Must prepare the house
    Gather foodstuffs - chink the walls
    Ice around the moon

    Torn between the signs
    On the one hand wisdom says
    Cold is on the way

    Yellow sun, not gold
    Still whispers seductively
    Cold will never come

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  • 11-14-2007 12:01 PM In reply to

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    Re: Poetry Challenge: Write a Fall/Autumn Haiku

     Marney, Aunt Bobby -- What an incredible contest -- and conquest -- of the written language.  You both are powerful word-players, breathing life where there was nothing.  Praise God for you both -- and watch for these works in The Artella Daily Muse!

     

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    Re: Poetry Challenge: Write a Fall/Autumn Haiku

     

    They come in Tahoes
    Trailers and dirt bikes in tow
    For over-night stays

    Revilers do not
    Bake beneath the desert sun
    Run with devil winds

    They breathe alfalfa
    I mow in the dead of night
    And sprint from winter



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  • 11-14-2007 12:26 PM In reply to

    • Opheliac
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    Re: Poetry Challenge: Write a Fall/Autumn Haiku

    Sky light turns warm orange

    Cascades through open windows

    Welcomes sleepy eyes
     






     

  • 11-14-2007 3:52 PM In reply to

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    Re: Poetry Challenge: Write a Fall/Autumn Haiku

    Wrinkles crack faces.

    Weathered veins dissect dry leaves.

    Time marches forward.

     

    Bill

     

    Bill Charlebois

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  • 11-19-2007 9:46 AM In reply to

    • bomackison
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    Re: Poetry Challenge: Write a Fall/Autumn Haiku

    Eight Haiku for Autumn's Days

     

    Rooted shaggy birch
    Stretching, grasping at the sky
    I stand here grounded.

    ***  

    At the forest’s edge
    An acorn has taken fruit
    Four leaves, an oak tree.

    *** 

    Weathered whitewashed barn
    Broken windows, empty stalls
    Ghostly cows lowing

    *** 

    Bared white and black birch
    Its leafed glory stripped by wind
    Watches orange-dressed tree

    *** 

    Outstretched black branches
    Supporting dense orange cover
    Awaiting winter

    *** 

    October sunrise
    Silhouettes of withered weeds
    Earth’s cycling seasons

    *** 

    Lavender scallops
    Fungus many layers deep
    Gift on path I walk

    *** 

    Tall trees stand sentry
    Lake captures mirrors of trunks
    Double the pleasure

    *** 

    Dawn breaks pink and yellow
    Blinding orb slides through the clouds
    Gifting light and life

     

     

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  • 11-19-2007 7:47 PM In reply to

    • Heather
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    Re: Poetry Challenge: Write a Fall/Autumn Haiku

    Barbara, from one nature lover to another, I LOVE your poem. I am so there as I read it! By the way, I'm from Illinois and lived near Madison from 2005-2007. I really miss the Midwest.

    Thank you for your gift!

     Heather

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  • 11-19-2007 8:40 PM In reply to

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    Re: Poetry Challenge: Write a Fall/Autumn Haiku

    here's my first try... 

    the hay is all in

    cows will have plenty to eat

    when grass is frozen

     

    the growing is done

    only the harvest is left

    will there be enough?

     

    the corn is all in

    corn cribs are ready to burst

    the cows clean the fields

     

    If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music he hears, however measured and far away. -- Thoreau

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  • 11-19-2007 8:55 PM In reply to

    • Heather
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    Re: Poetry Challenge: Write a Fall/Autumn Haiku

    the days get shorter

    blankets are added to beds

    life is slowing down.

     

    families gather

    Macy's parade and football

    say grace and dig in.

     

    white meat or dark meat?

    eat your green vegetables.

    pumpkin or pecan?

     

    we're on our way home

    it was a wonderful meal

    hugs, kisses and thanks.

    If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music he hears, however measured and far away. -- Thoreau

    Prince William County, VA
  • 11-19-2007 8:57 PM In reply to

    • Heather
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    Re: Poetry Challenge: Write a Fall/Autumn Haiku

    finally, a couple of singletons:

    November is here.

    what happened to summer?

    jingle bells come soon.

     ********************************

    burning piles of leaves

    out in the gravel driveway

    leaf veins are embers.

    If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music he hears, however measured and far away. -- Thoreau

    Prince William County, VA
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