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Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

Last post 03-13-2008 10:59 AM by Goya Toledo. 26 replies.
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  • 03-06-2008 5:45 PM In reply to

    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    Jajajajaja!!!!!!!! This is too much... Chamaleon, it is lovably, cheers!!!!!!!!!!! from GOYA

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  • 03-09-2008 3:38 PM In reply to

    • KateSinging
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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

     Hello Poets -

    I'm loving these juicy poems!  We live in a colorful world, thank heavens, and these poems celebrate that.  Here's one I wrote in half-surprise at my new fondness for orange - a color I'd discounted when growing up as either muddy (like our brownish-orange furniture, so characteristic of the 70's) or else too bubbly or exotic to have anything to do with us.  I surprised myself by buying an orange kimono and feeling like a queen in it.  Since then, I see orange as a flag of possibilities, of light-heartedness and honest beauty.

     

    Orange

     

    was only a flash among apples

    in the kitchen,

    not to be eaten but peeled away

    to get at paleness beneath –

     

    was paired in our house with brown

    and dosed with rust

    that left it limp

    and unprotesting

    as the couch it covered –

     

    was, in our steel-grey and lobster-green lives,

    in our brick-red and hospital-white days,

    unthinkable

    as an oriole preening on the mantel,

    an incongruity

    fanning a brilliant wing at dusk.

     

    A flirt, a tease, a light-weight

    I thought her –

    nothing to do with us.

     

    But last year,

    in pumpkins she spoke first,

    in maple leaves I heaped on tables,

    in zinnias and lilies,

    in monarchs and calendulas,

    in new carrots and nasturtiums:

    these were her first words to me.

     

    And then, in certain songs

    and the swirl of silk skirts,

    in the flare and heat

    that comes of reading some poems,

    in fierceness that puts the flute

    in your hands:

    she opened me fully to her oratory.

     

    And so I wrap myself

    in the orange kimono

    and wearing it, become queen

    of flowers and desire –

    her newest friend

    and temporary vessel

    for the world’s joy

    she seeks to inflame.

     KateSinging

    Much have I traveled in the realms of gold
    and many goodly sights have I seen...
  • 03-09-2008 5:20 PM In reply to

    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    Bravo KateSinging, this is a great poem, and I admire your colorful words.Love them, thanks,

    ORANGE

    you paint my toenails orange

    buy matching lipstick

    I hope the words come out the same

    you cream the soles of my feet with orange juices and roses 

    and make me dance barefoot

    in a garden of mexican paper flowers...

    From GOYA

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  • 03-09-2008 5:47 PM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

     This one's for you Goya!

     

     

    I went to Goya’s spa

     

    and she colored my hair with pomegranate juice

    (and fed me the seeds on a crimson dish)

     

    then she clamped orange halves over my ears

    and told me to listen to the fiesta inside them

     

    then she lined up a thousand lemon seeds

    and told me to take my pick of yellow good luck

     

    then she smeared my skin with broccoli smash

    and sent me to lie belly-up in the new grass

     

    then she made a maze of blueberries

    and instructed me to eat my way to the center

     

    then she hung a bunch of purple-black grapes

    from a streetlight and bid me fetch them with my wings

     

    then she built a small perfect house of plums

    and invited me to sit in its cool shade

     

    Every color she speaks is healthy

     

     

    KateSinging

    9 March 2008

     

    Much have I traveled in the realms of gold
    and many goodly sights have I seen...
  • 03-09-2008 9:33 PM In reply to

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    AWESOME, What a place...the four last verses, before every color she speaks is healthy, of this poem KateSinging are great images, it is a beautifully written poem that is vivid, and alive in every sense of the word.  Plenty of colors and tropicalism, and happy. You show us the way to the center: GRACIAS.

     

    SILVER

    We each become attendant to our skin,

    the ears, the eyes, the hands,

    the curve of rib, the wrist and limb,

    and then, we made

    salt and juices from the ocean,

    like a moment from childhood

    sleeping on the beach,

     with the scent of water, the aroma of colors,

    dreaming  like ammonites.

    Oh, our soft silver skin.

     

    From GOYA

    9 marzo 2008

     

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  • 03-10-2008 6:42 AM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    A Poem About Color and Other Things

    Am I a poet if I call myself that?
    And is it poetry I write if I put words on paper and call those words a poem?
    If I am a poet and I write poetry,
    why can I not find the words to write this poem?
    I think to write about the bright colors, the gay moments, the feel of a cool breeze on my cheek
    but today I see the browns and grays of soulful times, and the breeze is hot and dry.

    Bo 

    “Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow.”
    Mary Anne Radmacher


  • 03-10-2008 8:42 AM In reply to

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    Poems about colors:

     

    I could eat your poems

    like a crow or a fox

    eating eggs, fruits and brilliant things;

    because they are rubies, bones,

    clouds,pearls and gold

    pulsating in my pages.

    From GOYA

    10 marzo 2008

     

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  • 03-10-2008 9:09 AM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    But as you, yourself, said to me, Bo, the browns and greys have a place in art!

    Hugs ~ Aunt Bobby

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  • 03-11-2008 7:53 PM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    Yes, the "browns and greys have a place in art", Aunt Bobby and Bo!  The good thing about those seemingly 'ordinary' colors compared to Crimson Red or Peppermint Green, for example, is that they can be...

    A Chestnut brown....deep, heavily saturated; or
    Cinnamon...rich dark brownish red, sweet and aromatic
    How about Sable...dark brown furry throws and so-soft cushions?
    Rich Dark Brown...chocolate with its' smooth creamy texture that melts in your mouth - mmm; and
    Mocha, expresso and cocoa....ahhhhhhhhh, flavor-flavor.

    - chameleon

     




     

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  • 03-11-2008 8:54 PM In reply to

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    Re: Challenge: Let's write short poems or feelings about colors...

    Nice, Chameleon,

    Bo 

    “Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow.”
    Mary Anne Radmacher


  • 03-11-2008 11:30 PM In reply to

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     My color poem quicky on this glorious March 12, 2008, 1:08 a.m.

     

    DREAM RIDE 

    Come night-horse on pthalo-blue wings,

    blow over me.

    Your pin-prick star winds pierce

    my eyelids with silvered-comet random dreams:

    black-hole nightmares threatening to suck me into oblivion,

    left-over planetary dust clouds of grey-rock worry,

    rainbow galaxies to organize into buff-colored files before

    dawn's bright gold chariot pushes open my bedroom curtains.

    Your journey is paradoxical, too long and still too short.

    My hurting, tired mind blinks reddened eyes,

    in no shape to face another jangled-nerve day. 

     

     

    Peace, Luv and Froot Loops.
  • 03-13-2008 10:59 AM In reply to

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    THE BLUES OF JOSE MARIA MIJARES

    I am thinking about your blue hands, Jose Mijares.

    All the things they must have touch and paint,

    like thoughts, building doors, the stained glasses,

    the blue ladies from Habana. Clean hands,

    the blue veins and bones like a ballerina's.

    That young woman with a red lampshade in her head.

    No smudges of orange  glow or brown here,

    but blue seep from the skies undermining the folds of the night.

    the blue fragments, the baroque elements,

    the geometric colors of our own lives.

    I a looking at myself now in your "vitrales."

    From GOYA

     

     

     

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