New challenge, let's write poems about LETTERS...

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Goya Toledo Posted: 01-31-2008 9:37 PM

THE LETTER THAT WAS NEVER SENT:

 For many years

he wrote the same letter.

He will buy white paper

every few days

and begin again and again

Til sunrise would write

and then burned  what he'd done

madman.

 

From GOYA

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I remember the first letter he ever wrote me
The first time we had been apart since I knew he loved me
Cold and sterile -- I didn't understand -- I expected passion
He told my mother he did not know how to write me

"Write what you would say if she were here," she told him
The second letter was better
So full of passion I cut my trip short
And went home to him.

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Cartas de invierno -  Is that letters from hell?  That poor madman!   Tongue Tied 

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That is so romantic, Aunt Bobby!  Wilted Flower

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Bill -- "Cartas de invierno" means "Winter letters".  "Letters from Hell" would be "Cartas de infierno" -- Verdad, Goya?

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That's so funny!  It shows how easy it is to get mixed up when speaking a foreign language.  A friend of mine lived in Argentina for a while.  He and has wife got on a bus, and he said, "Dos para dios."  The bus driver had to explain he thinks my friend meant to say, "Dos para diez."

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Bill -- "Cartas de invierno" means "Winter letters".  "Letters from Hell" would be "Cartas de infierno" -- Verdad, Goya?

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Perfecto, winter letters.

Bill, letters from hell, it will be cartas desde el infierno ....Devil

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KateSinging replied on 02-05-2008 8:55 PM

 Hello Goya and Everyone -

Bill's fun translation got me started and before I know it I was reading letters from hell.  Great idea, Goya!  And great slip, Bill!  Here's the poem:

 

 

Letters from Hell

 

You read them with smoking fingers

and a glass of water at your elbow

to prevent blisters and stink.

Everyone in the house dreams

of meadows and ice-cream

while you sit as though chained to your desk,

reading by hell-light far

into the questionable part of the night.

 

In the morning you stuff them in the freezer

wrapped in an old towel,

hoping no one wants a frozen waffle

or a tube of orange juice.

Hunger doesn’t interest you now,

nor the dishes in the sink.

Children blowing through the doors

escape your notice at last.

 

Tonight you will clean up the puddle

of defrosted t.v. dinners and take the letters,

still blazing, from the freezer.

You’ll muffle their brilliance with the ruined towel

and creep past the sleepers

to your study, ducking low

beneath the smoke-alarm.

Dawn will find you still reading,

infernal script branded on each fingertip,

your eyes red as dragon eggs

and your blood simmering,

never more alive.

 

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5 February 2008

 

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 Kate, that is too cool.  I mean, hot!  Devil

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 Thanks, Bill!  And I LOVE your merry little demon.  Maybe a writer of letters from hell?

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Burning memories,

words etched forever on white.

To hell with "Dear John!"  Crying

 

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Powerful stuff, these "Letters from Hell" -- see what you started, Goya?  What a great topic!

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This just goes to show how one "letter" (v, f, or otherwise) can leave you feeling cold or hot, or just warm all over.

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Perhaps it lives under the furniture,

because it arrives early when the night invades us.

First, I leave it a letter with the rules of the house at the entrance.

Second, I leave it a glass of water by my bed

So that will not suffer thirst as it moves through the rooms.

I leave a bike by the door so that it takes a spin.

I do these things for it so that it will not complicate my dream.

It's my pact with the gosht of silence.

FROM GOYASleep

 

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Alice Jordan:

This just goes to show how one "letter" (v, f, or otherwise) can leave you feeling cold or hot, or just warm all over.

 

 

Love that, Alice!

And true, too, isn't it?  I'm very pro-v, myself.  As a child one of my favorite words was lavender, gleaned from the song, "Lavender's blue, Dilly dilly..."  (The other was serendipity which sounds just as magical as it really is.) 

 Alice's observation makes me think that it might be fun to do a SENSUAL ALPHABET poem - how letters affect the body and the senses.
 

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