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10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

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  • 03-08-2008 2:48 PM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

    Copper Cat,

    Funny, you mention having bits and pieces of lines - ready to explode into a full blown poem.  I have a running LIST of phrases and I know they are perfect in their own ways, but I have a really hard time letting them go and be part of a poem.  Weird, huh?

    Bo 

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  • 03-08-2008 2:50 PM In reply to

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    copper cat:

    I borrowed your breath when we kissed

    But I gave you myself for keeps.

     

     Lovely - and so true, we borrow so much in life.  But if we get to keep true love, we are truly blessed.

     

    Bo 

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  • 03-08-2008 2:53 PM In reply to

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    Kate,

    Never once thought of borrowing a girdle Big Smile  for my wedding, but I really do like the idea of snuggling in the girdle of life!

    Bo 

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    Mary Anne Radmacher


  • 03-08-2008 3:20 PM In reply to

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    bfahrenbac:

    Kate,

    Never once thought of borrowing a girdle Big Smile  for my wedding, but I really do like the idea of snuggling in the girdle of life!

    Bo 




    I k now!  It's a funny thing.  I don't know if you could call it a "girdle" exactly (though I really like that word) - more like a sort of bodysuit thingie.  Is that what a girdle is?  Well, anyway, I didn't need it so much for the wedding dress as for the night before when we had this fabulous party and I wore the slinkiest dress of my life.  THEN it was extremely necessary.  And I thank my friend Blanche who always has these sort of things!
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  • 03-14-2008 7:50 AM In reply to

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     Hello Poet Friends -

    I have a gig tonight, so I thought I'd get this in early (for a change!).  Bo, thank you again for such a fruitful suggestion.  I have so enjoyed thinking about these things for the last month (!  did that go by fast, or what?), and having the chance to write about them and to read your poems has been very special.

    cheers to all -

    KateSinging 

     ps - this one closer to 20 than 10

     

    Something Blue

     

    The head of the Liffey,

    Dublin’s main artery,

    is bearded and blue, with a wild eye

    and the suggestion of swan-necks

    fish and marsh-weed

    in his wavering crown

     

    For years I have carried

    from place to wandering place

    a brooch of his stern

    and beneficent head,

    token of rivers’ mysteries

    and my own

     

    In the wavelet hem

    of my wedding dress

    I pinned that head,

    the blue so blue on the white,

    then met my beloved

    on the banks of my native

    Saco –

     

    wise river with egrets

    and cat-tails in her flowing crown,

    whose blue eye flashed

    in recognition, as a glad bride

    rushes a little forwards,

    eager to greet her groom.

     

     

    Kate

    14 March 2008

     

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  • 03-14-2008 1:40 PM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

     

    The Whole Blue Day (Wedding Quartet IV - Something Blue)

     

    Downy skies

    Bountiful waters, lake blue of course, and waves with root beer froth

    Navy truck (to get us there)

    Groom, true blue love, of soothing blue and pewter (ah, so handsome!)

    Me, similarly frocked for our day

    And, for a moment in time, seeing in rosy colors

    Instead of dusty gray

     

    ~copper cat

     

    Be you - and no one else.
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  • 03-16-2008 4:50 AM In reply to

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    Sorry it's late - a sick in bed kind of week. Still sluggish, so it took me nearly 30 minutes to write.

     

    THE WEDDING QUARTET - SOMETHING BLUE 

    That first Christmas they spent the last of her paycheck
    on rent and kerosene for the space heater,
    only a few dollars remaining to see them to the new year.

    She skipped lunch the day before Christmas
    rode the el into the Loop and
    squeezed through Marshall Fields’ shoppers
    searched all fumbly frustrated fretful,
    finally found him a tiny comb in tortoiseshell
    for him to groom his unruly moustache -
    a fad that year, those moustache combs.

    He, the numbers’ cruncher, not the wordsmith,
    fashioned a love sonnet in a fashion of rhyme,
    rolled the typing paper like parchment
    and tied it with a ribbon he bought at the Woolworth Five and Dime.

    The miniature comb mingles with his silver cufflinks
    and his Grandfather’s watch fob in his jewelry case -
    their love long outlasting the moustache.

    The worn sheet of fresh love’s promise,
    tucked in with the marriage and birth certificates,
    is still rolled tight with affection,
    still tied with a blue ribbon, a sky blue ribbon –
    a ‘sky's-the-limit’ ribbon.

    by Bo




     

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    Mary Anne Radmacher


  • 03-16-2008 7:53 PM In reply to

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     That's beautiful, copper cat, and I love the title, too - even the "navy truck."  There's so much to look at and feel in the "root beer froth" and the "downy skies", and such nice music in the "soothing blue and pewter."

     KateSinging

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  • 03-16-2008 7:55 PM In reply to

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     Definitely worth the wait, Bo!  I sighed with pleasure at the end and felt this curious sensation in the bridge of my nose that happens when I read a good poem or hear a good song.  The nose knows, as they say.  This is a beauty.

    KS 

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  • 03-17-2008 5:53 AM In reply to

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    Copper Cat,

    You used color to such an advantage in this poem.  And the hint of rosy into dusty gray takes the reader's mind on a trip far away from the words on the page.  Nicely done.

    Bo 

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    Mary Anne Radmacher


  • 03-17-2008 5:58 AM In reply to

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    Kate,

    Such a lovely rhythm and your word choices are always satisfying.  I read it aloud quite a few times - 'ear candy' instead of eye candy!

    Bo


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  • 03-17-2008 6:02 AM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

    To all 10 minute poets, and anyone else who wants to join in - the more the merrier:

    Are we writing poetry for Friday? We need a topic. I picked the last 4 (greedy soul) so who will speak up now?  Throw something out so we can give it a think before Friday!

    Bo 

    “Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow.”
    Mary Anne Radmacher


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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

    Alright, since this Wedding Quartet business really was bittersweet and I ended up lumping them all into 1 miserable poem, so that I had not much more my heart wanted to budge on that topic, I sort of writhed there in my nightmarish realm and tapped into it nightly, visually to let off steam.  Well, the more I bitterly explain, complain the more a hypocrite I doth declare myself to be.... hmm.  Moving right along... why don't we, this being Saint Patrick's Day and all, move right from blue into the Green and whatever it bestirs in your heart and soul.  Be careful now...  The Honeymoon's Over.    ~Lori

    Lori

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  • 03-21-2008 6:41 PM In reply to

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     Hi friends -

    Here's some green, and very welcome it is to think about, too. Good idea, Lori!

    KS 

     

     

    Spring-Cleaning

     

    All winter, the best green sheets

    have been bundled up

    in the laundry basket,

    waiting for the wash.

     

    Now, as March bustles

    from room to room

    and polishes to a blue sheen

    one beveled edge

    of the lake’s frozen mirror,

     

    the wind and the sun tug

    the dirty white blankets

    from our thawing bed

    and open all the windows.

     

    O, let in Spring’s bracing air!

    Lay our bed with linens

    of tender green

    so that fresh tendrils of hope

    twine through our dreams.

     

    Kate

    21 March 2008

     

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  • 03-26-2008 9:00 PM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

     Hello Poets!

    Just to keep things rolling, how's this for a theme for this Friday:

    Write a poem about an animal you love.  (Remember, love exists in the present tense, but that doesn't mean the animal must as well).

    happy musing,

    KateSinging 

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