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10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

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  • 02-24-2008 1:41 PM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

     Copper Cat ~

    older love, youthful spirit ~ how true. 

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  • 02-27-2008 4:36 PM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

    ****JUST A REMINDER****

     
    The second poem in the 10 minute poem series WEDDING QUARTET focuses on the theme  "SOMETHING NEW"

    (remember the wedding tradition verse - something old, something new, something borrowed, something blue)  - 10 minute poems, using these as a series of 4 prompts for the next weeks.

    So post by FRIDAY, February 29,  (HAPPY LEAP YEAR DAY  BTW !!!)

    by 5 pm, CST   (you know, I can't resist these details, feel free to adapt to whatever)

    Don't worry if you feel there's never enough time to sit down and compose poetry.  This is poetry on the fly.  Take a 10 MINUTE stab at a few lines and see what happens.  You'll never know unless you try it.  And if you really get in the groove and go over 10 minutes, not to worry.  Just give a rough idea of your time.

    ENJOY!  EVERYONE JOIN IN! 

    Bo 

     

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  • 02-28-2008 12:44 PM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

    (Closer to 20 minutes than 10, but I had the beginning and ending quickly in mind and had to figure out the middle.)

     

    WEDDING QUARTET - SOMETHING NEW

     
    I. First Anniversary

    Gino’s deep-dish pizza in the heart
    of Chicago’s famous Rush Street
    Double cheese, double sausage
    Jukebox sweet singing
    Seals and Croft’s Summer Breeze
    A couple of Old Style’s for you
    a shot or two of tequila for me
    “Don’t forget the lemon and the salt.”

    II. Fourteenth Anniversary

    Macaroni and cheese out of that
    familiar blue box
    Applesauce, sweetened of course
    Single carrot sticks eaten under protest
    Fourteen dripping candles spread atop
    five cupcakes, burnt and lop-sided
    Raffi thumping out Baby Beluga
    and This Little Light of Mine.
    “You kids stop kicking each other
    and I mean this very second.”

    III. Thirty-second Anniversary

    White Bordeaux from the south of France
    Eight grain bread just baked
    drizzled with olive oil and fresh Parmesan
    Chilled smoked salmon and dill sauce
    Slices of Asian pears
    George Winston playing Sweet Soul on the keys.
    Our home quiet after all these years.
    “Why don’t we make it an early evening?”

    by Bo
    2.28.08
     

     

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  • 02-29-2008 11:12 AM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

    Wedding Quartet II - Something New

     

    Askance she looked

    As if the waters would pull her in

    Instead she hears the call

    Of a young eagle overhead

     

    He blesses the groom

    And kisses the bride

    Both blushing, fresh in the day

    Fresh in the virgin day

    Be you - and no one else.
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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

    Hello Poet Buddies,  This has indeed been a bittersweet subject for me and I scrapped my first attempt at putting Something Old (my own wedding just brings up some very painful and sad memories for me) together.  I let it stew for the first week.  This came out this morning and is a combination of all 4 words in one poem.  It's been a very interesting exercise/subject.  Not sure what else will come in 10 minutes next time.  Hmmm. 

    ~Wedding Quartet~
    “The Wedding Guest”


    On this blue day, I feel like nothing more
    Than an amanuensis
    Transcribing all the bits and snatches

    Of a new love song riding in on the wind.
    In my heart I carry an old song, a familiar song.
    Why not me?  Where is my Mr. Wonderful?
    “Someday, the right person will come along for you…”
    Secretly, I have kept it smoldering these many years.
    Today I will watch one more sister marching off to the beat of love’s wings.
    Perhaps this fresh breeze will finally set to rest
    The embers of that old flame, but
    As the floral tuft makes its arc through the air in my direction
    I watch helplessly as my hopes suddenly take flight once more to the stirring up
    Of the next borrowed sparks of false hope…

     

    Lori

    "Listen to your life. See it for the fathomless mystery that it is. In the boredom and pain of it no less than in the excitement and gladness: touch, taste, smell your way to the holy and the heart of it because in the last analysis all moments are key moments, and life itself is grace." ~Frederick Buechner
  • 03-02-2008 7:21 AM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

     Copper Cat,

    This is touching, both the groom and bride blushing.  And I love the first line "Askance she looked" - I love the phrasing of that.

    Bo 

    “Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow.”
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  • 03-02-2008 7:23 AM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

    Lori,

    The description of the tossing of the bridal bouquet and all its implications comes through so well.  So easy to identify with...

    Bo 

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    Mary Anne Radmacher


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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

     Hello Poets!  Great to read you all and see again the spectrum of feeling this topic evokes in all of us.  I'm late this week with my "something new" poem, but here it is anyway.  My true love took my name when we married which is pretty unusual.  I love to think of him joining all these Englishmen of my dad's family - this wild upstart with fresh ideas and notions of change.  

       Thanks for so many great poems this week!

    KateSinging 

     

     

    The New Mr. Chadbourne

     

    wears the name at first

    like a jacket with the pins still in it,

    the fit between tailorings

     

    It’s not his father’s coat

    but mine, clapped on fourteen

    generations of English backs

     

    Worn against the sea-air

    scurvy and questionable geography

    en route to a New World

     

    Slung round the shoulders

    as they stripped pine bark and shaped

    boards to fit the roof on an early house

     

    Handed casually, man to man,

    a name to wear from the first breath

    until the patched and threadbare last

     

    Dozens of northern ocean-goers –

    blue-eyed, pale, and doughty –

    joined by my wedding this odd volunteer:

     

    Green-eyed, Italian-blooded, Kansas-born

    man who liked the cut of my coat

    more than the one he was handed

     

    and thought it time for a change.

     

    Kate

    2 March 2008

     

     

     

    Much have I traveled in the realms of gold
    and many goodly sights have I seen...
  • 03-03-2008 4:01 AM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

    Stan,

    The analogy of the coat to the name works wonderfully.  I can just imagine this dearest of guys wearing his new name tentatively, so as not to get stuck by those pins.  By now it must be a perfect fit.

    Bo 

    “Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow.”
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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

    bfahrenbac:

     Copper Cat,

    This is touching, both the groom and bride blushing.  And I love the first line "Askance she looked" - I love the phrasing of that.

    Bo 

    Bo, I've been waiting to use that phrase for awhile now...do any of you have just pieces of poems waiting to be used?

    I guess I should have (inner critic sounding) been reading the "Poem and Garden" section more often - I saw that I was in today's. Thank you, Constance, and everyone for your comments and inspiration.

    Are we all ready to do "Wedding Quartet III - Something Borrowed" tomorrow? 

    Hugs,

    ~copper cat

     

    Be you - and no one else.
  • 03-07-2008 11:14 AM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

     

    Wedding Quartet III - Something Borrowed

     

    Borrowed - the earth we stood on the day we said, "I do."

    Borrowed - the best man, from his clan, a priceless presence

    Borrowed - the maid of honor, from the best man

    I borrowed your breath when we kissed

    But I gave you myself for keeps.

    Be you - and no one else.
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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

     Copper Cat, that is so lovely and the feelings are so fine.  I loved reading it.

    Much have I traveled in the realms of gold
    and many goodly sights have I seen...
  • 03-07-2008 1:48 PM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

     Here's my own for Week 3 - this one a 4-minute poem, as time is very short.  What fun, though!

    Wishing you all happiness-

    KateSinging

     

     

    Girdle

     

    Never a girdled girl,

    I borrowed one for the big day

    from my pale friend Blanche –

     

    a beige skin two shades darker

    than either of us

    I had to shimmy into.

     

    It pinched, but in a good way

    and I dove sleek as a seal

    into the foam of my dress

     

    Came up for sips of sweet air

    next to my handsome groom.

    Gasped as the sweet girdle of life

     

    stretched to fit us both.

     

     

    Kate

    7 March 2008

     

     

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  • 03-07-2008 2:31 PM In reply to

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    Re: 10-minute Friday poems with a buddy

     
    Wedding Quartet III  -  Something Borrowed

    Ma said I was borrowing trouble when
    I married poor - can’t buy bread with love
    and married young - not old enough to know better
    when I married the wrong guy - what will the neighbors say
    and was married by the wrong preacher - what will God in heaven say

    But I went on ahead, said my “I do” right proud
    and the money I saved by borrowing trouble
    - and not buying it outright -
    paid for my dress and the band and his dancing shoes.

     

    Bo 

     

     

    “Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow.”
    Mary Anne Radmacher


  • 03-07-2008 2:37 PM In reply to

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     Fabulous, Bo!  Such spirit - and great music in it, too!

    Stan 

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    and many goodly sights have I seen...
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