in

Another question about poetry...

Last post 04-02-2008 10:19 AM by Goya Toledo. 10 replies.
Page 1 of 1 (11 items)
Sort Posts: Previous Next
  • 08-25-2007 9:13 PM

    • MarneyM
    • Top 10 Contributor
    • Joined on 04-28-2007
    • Big Island, Hawaii
    • Talented Time Traveler
    • Points 41,014

    Another question about poetry...

    I really liked quoting in the PassionPoetry newsletter some of the posts in response to my "why write poetry" inquiry.  

    I thought I'd throw another one out here, for anyone to answer who would like to respond:

    Do you find writing poetry to be healing?  If so, how?  Give a specific example, if possible --

     

    Marney Makridakis
    Artella Founder
    I paint the earth, the earth paints me...
  • 08-25-2007 11:30 PM In reply to

    • Wozzie
    • Top 25 Contributor
      Female
    • Joined on 08-17-2007
    • Eugene, Oregon
    • Dancing Day-Tripper
    • Points 9,029

    Re: Another question about poetry...

    I have such a love/hate relationship with poetry. There is this snobby part of me that feels that anyone can write it, that is doesn't have to make sense as it is all interpretation, and even jibberish can pass for poetry.

     But then....

     When I sit down to write it, some of the most profound parts of my soul pour out on the page in a way I don't think I could have done in any other form of writing. That, in itself, is healing and reopens my eyes that poetry is indeed a gift to be given freely and relished recklessly.

    It's like I'm perched on the handlebars of a blind man's bike. -- The Shins
  • 08-26-2007 3:13 PM In reply to

    • apjo
    • Top 25 Contributor
      Female
    • Joined on 07-16-2007
    • Western Massachusetts
    • Dancing Day-Tripper
    • Points 5,010

    Re: Another question about poetry...

    MarneyM:

    I really liked quoting in the PassionPoetry newsletter some of the posts in response to my "why write poetry" inquiry.  

    I thought I'd throw another one out here, for anyone to answer who would like to respond:

    Do you find writing poetry to be healing?  If so, how?  Give a specific example, if possible --

     

    I hadn't really thought much about poetry  since my dramatic  teen years.Every crush was a soul yearning and so forth ...

    Then I didn't do anything poetic  for  almost 2 decades. 

    I began to write poetry in response to a creative  writing college  course assignment in the years after my husband's sudden death.

    I wrote about our dashed  dreams, how I felt without him , and coming to grips with his manner of death.

     I also wrote  poetry  about my everyday activities  , taking pleasure in every moment   I'm still here .

    I know it's healing power first hand.

    "We are cups,constantly and quietly being filled.The trick is knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out."
    ~Ray Bradbury~
    Filed under:
  • 08-28-2007 7:03 AM In reply to

    • Outlaw
    • Top 100 Contributor
      Female
    • Joined on 07-19-2007
    • Foothills of Lower Podunk, SC
    • Tropical Tourist
    • Points 935

    Re: Another question about poetry...

    APJO and I share a similar background to our most recent poetry years.

    What began as pouring out angst ending in healing sore places in the heart.

    For example, searching for a small slice of serenity in an emotional storm 4 years ago I wrote this:

    The Reed

    Alone
    before this rising grief
    bowed by sorrow
    battered by pain
    beaten
    but not broken
    survives
    to rise again.


    —Josie Ingle (c) November 2003

    Life should not be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in an attractive and well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, chocolate in one hand - strawberries in the other, body thoroughly used up, totally worn out and screaming: WOO HOO, WHAT A RIDE!

    – – Unknown

  • 08-28-2007 7:54 AM In reply to

    • apjo
    • Top 25 Contributor
      Female
    • Joined on 07-16-2007
    • Western Massachusetts
    • Dancing Day-Tripper
    • Points 5,010

    Re: Another question about poetry...

    Outlaw , that reed really came to life when I read your poem.

     

    An example  of my capturing of everyday moments  is in my  poem that  got 3rd place in  the Poetic  Idol contest.

     

    It was about my father's  Sunday breakfasts while we were living with my  parents during the past few years.

     

    Here is another poem with a snapshot of a dinner with my parents during those years ( I'm a serious foodie, and  I was also the main cook  during this time ):

     

    Liquid Assets 

    Gently shake
    that sauce
    if you
    have a care
    the ceiling
    needs no spice
    the curtains
    look so nice
    when they are
    devoid of flavor

    This chronicled  an incident  where my Dad  handed my Mom the worcester sauce with the lid already loosened,which she did not realize  or  check before shaking vigorously.Sauce spurted out everywhere .She was so mad.

    This was followed by profuse arguing between my parents...

    She doesn't like this poem to represent the incident, or even be reminded of  it .

    In fact  she's jealous of the  Sunday Breakfast poem.

    It's strange!

    "We are cups,constantly and quietly being filled.The trick is knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out."
    ~Ray Bradbury~
    Filed under:
  • 08-28-2007 7:59 AM In reply to

    • apjo
    • Top 25 Contributor
      Female
    • Joined on 07-16-2007
    • Western Massachusetts
    • Dancing Day-Tripper
    • Points 5,010

    Re: Another question about poetry...

    ...oh yeah, and she was wearing white !

     

    I never understood  her wearing white to my dinners.I tended to make  colored sauces ...

    "We are cups,constantly and quietly being filled.The trick is knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out."
    ~Ray Bradbury~
  • 12-13-2007 7:54 PM In reply to

    • KateSinging
    • Top 25 Contributor
      Female
    • Joined on 12-14-2007
    • Lunenburg, MA
    • Wild Wiggling Wayfarer
    • Points 11,872

    Re: Another question about poetry...

    Yes, I do find it healing, mainly because I'm often surprised when my instinct or intuition shows me a new way of feeling or thinking about something.  I'll give you an example gladly.

     Two years ago, my dad died of lung cancer.  After that, I found it difficult to even look at a cigarette, and anytime I saw someone smoking my heart ached for them.  That summer I went to a writing conference in Maine where we were given the prompt to ask someone a question.  This poem is what came to me then, and I can still remember my own surprise that I should be able to see smoking not only as an act of willful self-destruction but as an act of choice, connection, and warmth.  I should tell you that my dad was a lobsterman, and so smoking on the boat was a big part of his life.

     Thanks for a great topic!

     

     

    Are you still smoking?

     

    It’s a bit of warmth on the boat, Kate,

    and a lodestone for me.

    I know the day’s pattern this way,

    like the shadow on a sun dial.

    And it’s a compass needle

    that points to a James Dean life.

    And company, something to share.

    Got a light? they say.

    Yeah, right here in my pocket.

    And a tiny lighthouse in the dark,

    a red-eye that finds you.

    And yeah, I’ve heard that

    about nails in your coffin,

    but how about a finger

    that points towards a choice?

    How about that spark

    that says you’re alive?

     

    Kate

    18 August 2005


     

    Much have I traveled in the realms of gold
    and many goodly sights have I seen...
  • 12-13-2007 9:57 PM In reply to

    • Heather
    • Top 25 Contributor
    • Joined on 05-30-2007
    • Wild Wiggling Wayfarer
    • Points 8,094

    Re: Another question about poetry...

    Beautiful poem, Kate. How cool that you were able to ask a question and then answer from your father's point of view. I like that style. Maybe we would all find that we are more alike than we imagine if we would take a moment to think about things from someone else's point of view.

    If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music he hears, however measured and far away. -- Thoreau

    Prince William County, VA
    Filed under:
  • 12-14-2007 6:06 PM In reply to

    • KateSinging
    • Top 25 Contributor
      Female
    • Joined on 12-14-2007
    • Lunenburg, MA
    • Wild Wiggling Wayfarer
    • Points 11,872

    Re: Another question about poetry...

     Thank you so much, Heather!

    I wonder if it might be fun for us to try to write a poem from the perspective of someone we don't like or don't understand.  For instance, in my own life, I could try to write a poem from the persepctive of a hunter, because it seems impossible for me to imagine taking pleasure from killing a creature.  And yet, I know that there must be things about hunting that are beautiful, inspiring, and engaging.

     

    Would you like to try this and swap poems? 

    Much have I traveled in the realms of gold
    and many goodly sights have I seen...
  • 12-20-2007 1:42 PM In reply to

    • bomackison
    • Top 25 Contributor
      Female
    • Joined on 08-05-2007
    • Wisconsin
    • Wild Wiggling Wayfarer
    • Points 10,964

    Re: Another question about poetry...

     KS,

    Just read your poetry post to Heather, and I'd love to try that point of view switch, too.   I'm thrilled to have another poet who is excited about the craft.

    Bo 

    “Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow.”
    Mary Anne Radmacher


  • 04-02-2008 10:19 AM In reply to

    Re: Another question about poetry...

    Dear friends: To me poetry is healing and a prayer for peace. Poetry is light.

    We bring light to the world with the written words. Each poem goes beyond the personal experience

    to profound reflections on the state of being human!!! We struggle and share the struggle.

    We have a commitment with this healing process again and again, verse after verse.

    I look to poetry for answers, healing answers to my problems and the problems of human kind.

    Observation and process. Poetry is a healing process among others things.

    GRACIAS, from GOYA

    M
    Filed under:
Page 1 of 1 (11 items)