The Bates MoTELLA

Mother may be a little tied up right now. Or dead on her feet. Or just buried lately.

The Very Real New and Improved Me, Part 3

I had the half-altered picture from 1992 on the screen.

I also had displayed a paragraph from Part 2 of The Very Real New and Improved Me -- the monologue in response to Hemingway, who at the moment was occupying my celadon chenille-draped computer chair with the ruffled and fringed Norfolk Garden cushion on it.  I breathed deeply in preparation for battle.  You know what he did?  He read aloud one phrase, with just the faintest tinge of sarcasm:

" ...here I lift smooth translucent silver-rimmed China teacup to tongue and lips, tip my chin to one side and muse... "

Ignoring completely the 1992 photo with the alterations that had irritated him earlier, crunching, then brushing neon orange-dusted fingers against his shirt, he said, "Do that and your tea will spill out."

The first thing I noticed was that each word he uttered, as always, was one clipped syllable.  Then I realized that, in the most absurdly linear, concrete, adherence-to-dead-fact way he has of thinking, he was right. 

I hate when he does that.

Perhaps I'd have allowed him to engage me in debate, but this particular discourse would have been dreary and far from impromptu -- not even extemporaneous.  It was, in fact, already well scripted.  And it would end, finis, where he reminded me that I failed Intro to Logic, Phil 101.  In my first year of college, well before the first Apple was on the tree, much less on a desk in the living room and plugged into the wall.  It did no good to remind him that I failed Phil 101 due to no error in logic of mine: This "class" met at 7:05 a.m., scarcely hours from the typical bedtime of any Journalism, Drama, or Art major I knew.  The fact that the Registrar and Scheduler deemed it possible to awaken, much less think, at that hour pointed to a sad lack of logic on somebody's part, albeit not my own.

Discretion being the better part of shutting up, I did that.  Eventually my husband left to chainsaw something.